Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Revising my Opinion


My revision piece is one that I had to eat a bit of crow on. I was so determined that I had it right that I was crushed to find out that I didn’t. After a lot of reflection I took to making some changes on my original and I now think that it is a much better piece. This particular piece centered on community. In the world of nursing is the closeness of the community that offers those of us who are a part of it a place. Even though nurses have gone through a lot of changes, becoming more of a patient advocate and a connection within the clinic and hospitals for patients, they are still a close community. I enjoy my work and my place within this sometimes hectic community. I am grateful for the wisdom and experience of my more experienced peers but even more than that I am grateful for the sense of family that I feel when I go to work.

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